Neo
stepped in. To Kgotla’s eyes, she walked in slow motion. Her elegant body was
dressed in a magnificent outfit. She walked towards the bed, glamorous in every
way. She did not smile, yet her face rippled with astounding beauty. Like
spring rain, tears coursed down her cheeks. Kgotla tried to stand up but the
casts would not let him. The doctor sneaked out and disappeared. Neo looked at
Kgotla through tear filled eyes and smiled for the first time. He smiled back,
like a child at the sight of candy. She leaned over the bed and their lips
locked in an explosive bang. They kissed vehemently. Careful not to step on his
healing limbs, she climbed on the bed and lay by his side. None of them had
spoken a word. Neo pulled the blankets and burrowed underneath. They faced each
other, heads pressed on the same pillow, faces nearly touching. Neo opened her
mouth to speak. “Shhh...” Kgotla whispered. “Hush, don’t say a word. Don’t even lift that
head off the pillow. I love it when your eyes look at me that way. I’d like to
wake up like this every morning. So sleepy, your eyes, yet they melt the marrow
in my bones.” Neo’s succulent lips twitched in a tiny, almost hesitant smile.
For a fleeting moment her teeth sparkled like diamonds and briskly disappeared
behind the luscious lips. She snuggled closer to him, the fabric of her dress
brushing against his skin. Kgotla shuddered. She carefully pulled him closer
and locked her hands around him. In no time, they were both fast asleep, in
each other’s comfort.
This
is an extract from my short story, 'Soldier Boy.' It's yet another attempt at a
romantic tale that tells of a young man whose life is infested by
harsh challenges including unemployment and lack of financial
stability. Although he's performed exceptionally well at university, earning
himself an outstanding degree, he continues to roam the streets. He
questions the value of education and begins to doubt the cliché, Education is
the Key. Just when things turn out positively for him, just when he anticipates
a better future, just when he thought he found the love of his life, he comes
crashing down again - this time harder than he ever did. What is life? What is
love?
Soldier
Boy is a re-write of what used to be called Tears of a Soldier, and then later changed
to The Soldier. It's been rewritten several times and the title Soldier Boy
seems to fit well, for now. I hope it sticks.
Soldier Boy. I think it is another writing skill. It sounds like a joke. Powerful.
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